Group 8: Concept Development

• We have been recommended to remove our opening shot of our music video as we needed to reduce the cutting rate of the opening scene and use more powerful clips that anchor the main character and referrer to him as opposed to our opening shot which does not show anything about the boy.
  
• We intend to remove the first shot and replace it with our second shot and time stretch it out to make the shots longer. The second shot also displays the boys toys and him in bed in the reflection, a more powerful shot.