Group 8: Audience Research - Rough Cut

• Today we presented a rough cut of our music production to our peers. we recieved comments and reviews on how we could improve over the next few weeks.
• One comment we recieved was that after our Psycho opening that the first shot could slowly colour out following the black and white theme of the film progressivly getting lighter as the shot pans up. We would have to do this on Premier through colour grading or on After Effects to achiever the change over time in the shot. 
• It was suggested that the 'dream world' should show more interaction between the mother and son which is key to the narrative to show the relationship between the 2 key characters.
• Cutbacks or flashbacks from the dream state back to reality where the child is unhappy with his relationship with his father. The flashbacks to the abuse would show the contrast between when he is his happiest and then saddest. 
• All of these comments we have taken on board and i think we are more than capable of adjusting, we have more footage availibe and can improve our final production by the deadline.